its okay, could definetely use some work.
I can tell this isn't something you made right away, it definitely took some effort, but it, like anything else, could use some work.
first I'd like to say your choice of music, and ability to draw backgrounds is note worthy.
but the characters and the animation is what bothered me. The animation looked choppy and wrong sometimes, and truthfully there wasn't much of it. It felt like it was almost all static images, and camera pans. To the little animation there was, there was really shakily drawn characters, might I recommend a higher smoothing setting? So the animation to me looked like choppy, and off loops. It wasn't that bad, but it could REALLY use some TLC. I'd recommend adding more frames in the motion, using less blurs, plan out the animation more carefully, easing, and if you haven't already heard of it, use onion skinning.
I'm not trying to bash you or anything, I'm just saying that you should keep what you have going for you, and improve on what is slowing you down.
and I'm sorry but I really hate anime love storys, its just not my thing.